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Re: Silent Life
wow thats really good keep going
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Re: Ditching me
I wrote this for a school poetry project... ya.. I dont know how I got away with it Either. P.S sorry about the use of the word "fag" im not ...
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Re: Just Don't
Its really kinda no offense, you said it yourself, emo. i don't mind it being emo. It is a strange form of poetry but its good
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Re: The Most Beautiful Eyes (edited)
dose the smoking and drinking make her a whore or something else? i like it but i agree its like a story in crazy format just like lulu said
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Re: A l o n e
ya this was really good, i hate it when friendships die
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Re: The reasons why.
wow nice i only wish that the last two lines would rhyme better but i realize that they don't have to be perfect so there isn't much for me to ...
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Re: The Westward Wind
cool, i like it
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Re: Cardiacide
that was pretty good
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Re: Love
nice, i like the first, i forget what their called, group of stanzas and the last. im wikid new to this sight too, check out my story
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Re: Critique the Person Above You!
gladis a man and his sunflower
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Re: The Man and His Sunflower
wow that was really nice. I like the end and i like the reaction of the man.
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Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
i did a Google image search for flowers for algrenon because i was bored and i saw a charlie brown comic wich lead me to a link about swears in ...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Ahoy Insanity #3
that sucks about losing that thing. i really enjoyed this chapter, But how is it that EVERY body is mean to her. just to clarify ron and his mom moved ...
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Re: Ahoy Insanity #2
chocoholic, i think because hes moving he is going to meet carolina after, but i agree that i liked part one abit more
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Re: Ahoy Insanity #1
I can sympathize for Carolina but if some on said hey stupid that probably wouldn't get to me. But i can see where the speech impediment would be hurtful. i ...
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