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Re: Hung Over
Hung Over Oh god, why dose my head feel like it was beaten in with a bat? I thought as I opened my eyes to the dimly lit living room. ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Fiery Rain
umm.. that was kind of depressing, but it was a very creative style that i enjoyed. you may want to work on where the "bad mad" came from? dose the ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Empty Summer
you were thinking about john Lennon weren't you? because right after the guy who shot lennon did so, he sat down in central park and read catcher in the rye ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
dude! that was so messed up i started laughing hysterically. I'm not saying it was bad I'm just saying, it was so insane i didn't know what else to do
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Summer at Grandmas 2
awesome! I cant wait for part 3, is it just me or are Riley and Amanda's friend gonna hook up? i still think this is gonna make an awesome story ...
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Mid summer freedoms part one (maybe)
its not based off a particular event but ya your right i do have knowledge o f the situation
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Mid summer freedoms part one (maybe)
yes Charlie, is in fact, a boy lol
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Mid summer freedoms part one (maybe)
“Dose any one have a light?” I asked taking a cigarette from the pack on the table. “Ya sure I do.” Annie said as she searched her purse. “Don’t lose ...
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Blood, Razor blades, and Tears
Ya but Myrddin what you have to understand is this is the way the boy expresses himself. it happens to a lot of people. i don't like reading about cutting ...
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
i like smurfs thats as bad as i can come up with
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Ditching me
ya iknow i was totally pissed off when i wrote it, but i some how got a good grade so
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Ahoy Insanity #4
why wont Ronald be her friend? is he gonna be a complete "jerk" to her like every one else? really good chapter but i don't really like that last part... ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Untitled part 1
i ment to say it has to be i was not iwas
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: (no title...yet) Chapter 1
wow, that was pretty good, i like the normal problems like getting a step father put into (what im asuming because of the unicorn) a fantasy world
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Summer at Grandmas 1
wow really nice, i love it i can totally feel the build up of a great story, pm me when you have part two
Jan 13, 2008
