MADD94

Like it, or dislike it. take it or leave it. say what you want i don't care My story is hard to understand. If you can’t see where I stand ...

This is my final goodbye of sorts to my sixth grade teacher. I DON'T WANT ANY BAD CRITIQUES, I POURED MY HEART ONTO THIS PAPER AND NO ONE SHOULD TRY ...

I like it, partly because I understand exactly where your coming from, id like to read that series because I feel like i would have short story's maybe the same ...

Interesting! But wait she's still seven right, to be perfectly honest i think i would love to be back in second grade. I would live it up so much. But ...

dude thats messed... but also terrific. I think you should take out the whole second to last paragraph. the last lines tell that story. great piece though.

Okay, so we had to write a poem and share it with the whole team. I however got lazy and didn't write one, so like five minutes before hand i ...

neat. I never done this before so ill give it a try. Name: Charlie Age: 16 Gender: UNKNOWN lol just kidding male breed: Human Personality: funny, low self esteem, an ...

nice. But also confussing, so he sells kids? and are they black like the slave trades in America from like forever ago or like the whole underground stiff that goes ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I like the end. i really think you should explain more about what actually happened, like is it jail, or an asylum? I would also love to read more, ...

DUDE YOU'RE F#CKED UP! I LOVE IT, ITS HILLARIOUS

Dude! that is frickin good! i don't have much criticism but i absolutely love the first verse Every day I drive My car To work So I can pay To ...

This is pretty good but...What? I mean you didn't explain much and BBB says thats what your goin for, wich is fine. just what I'm wondering is if your gonna ...

thanks guys

ya i know i couldnt get it out of my head and so i wrote it

I'm not sure why I'm submitting this but i had this dream last night and its so random. keep in mind i wrote this at three in the morning and ...