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Re: Reducing Response
I Have to say that I really agree with what masquerade said. In addition to that, i think that either there wasn't enough of a solid meaning behind the piece, ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Bond parody i wrote to make with my friends
Note: I wrote this just for me and my friends so it's not really intended to be anything thats funny, and thats what I'm realy looking for feed back on ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Oh My (THe Concussion)
Oh my, oh my Oh! My heart beats to match the music the bass floats through the air i can hear my hair Oh my, oh my Oh! my mind ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The ungreatful dead (temporary tittle)
Okay first things first. I've never written a script before so the format may be way off. That being said, i want help with that and grammar, but my real ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]
hi, they are both realistic fiction with the same main character but not really related. its called eight periods in the life
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Eight periods in the life
Hi, this is the beginning of something, that i overloaded with information, and i want to keep most of it, but it has to be rearranged. I really want to ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to the Huddle
Hey, I'm Matt, whats up? anyone want to write a realistic fiction (name changes are cool) or, I'm getting a camera, and i totally need some one to help me ...
Dec 18, 2008 -
Re: Anonymous Disaster
Why do girls fight so dirty?? i can totally feel how much you hate this chick, is she real? it must suck to be a girl.
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Readers Crit
i need help and i will love you forever if you help.
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: If I Had Another Drink
that's awesome, truly awesome. it reminds me of this shel silverstine poem about loosing weight. was this derived from real life? and if so, way sorry dude
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Please help me
hi guys, i have this story that for once i actualy kindof care about... help?
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: I eat reviews
it's nothing speacial but its the end of a day, then i will go to the begining after.
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: 8 periods in the life. the busses
hey i need help with this i have no idea if it's keep able or not WARNING: there are a lot of profanity's and it may be hard to connect ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: The State of Massachussetts
Three men are in the middle of an abandoned where house on the outskirts of Boston. One of the men is being beaten by the other two tied to a ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: a very good question
i dont know what you think but i like this poem. i was proud of the fact that i wrote it in a dream than woke up and wrote it ...
Jul 15, 2008
