Lynlyn

Oh, this is very cute. I like her clothes, but I have a couple of anatomy nitpicks. I hope you don't mind a little crit :) The first is regarding ...

These are both beautiful, but I think the second one in particular is a little... oversaturated? The brightness of the colors makes it hard to know where to look. Your ...

It wasn't quite the best of times, but it really wasn't the worst of times, so seeing as it wasn't really either of the extremes, maybe it was the most ...

"And no one knew what happened to them." The thing is, I've actually read books like that. There was one by Margaret Peterson Haddix or someone like that where the ...