Lynlyn

Wow, this is nice, especially for paint! I can never make anything that smooth looking in Paint. The only thing I'm not sure about is the color scheme. The dark ...

Most of the things I thought of when I was reading this have already been mentioned (Suz is so thorough!), so the things I'm bringing up are take-it-or-leave-it suggestions. This ...

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I agree with the ninja - I think "pic" is a little informal, sounds a bit like chatspeak. "Crap" hits a bit hard too, but maybe that's what you were ...

As Fire said, it looks like a lot of the links are broken. but of the ones that are showing - The one that you've recolored is sooooo cool. I ...

These are stunning. I've only taken one or two photographs of butterflies in my life - they move so quickly, I'm never lucky enough or prepared enough. Looks like you ...

Yay, you posted your collage! I remember you telling us about this in the chat room. It's really a work of art, now that I see it - way way ...

If you want someone to call someone else a dear boy, they have to be called Laurence Olivier, not Whiskers. Best. Comment. Ever. That's all I have to say. Besides ...

One review, as promised! ;) The first thing I'm going to suggest is a book. It's called The Deluxe Transitive Vampire: A Handbook of Grammar for the Innocent, the Eager, ...

I reviewed it for ya. :) If you'd like, you can check out "Song of Shallow Waters" in my portfolio. I'm always looking for reviews of my fiction.

Since you already know I love this story, I'll get straight to the critiquing. ;) (Also, I love your name... it makes me giggle.) ‘I can breath under water.’ ‘No.’ ...

Pat, as usual. He's tough. The Ford F-150 is one of the most dangerous cars out there, according to test data. But Pat, he's stickin' around.

The good: Fantasy, sci-fi, and historical fiction. The bad: Action/adventure fiction, other fiction (anything "normal" - stuff that happens at a high school, someone's parents getting divorced... I ju

This chapter is lonely... This is the third chapter, as there are three pieces that precede it - as I told Ari, I don't expect you to critique those, but ...

If I were you, I'd try to downsize them a little. Right now, they're a bit too big to appreciate. Try opening them in paint if you've got Microsoft Windows. ...