Lynlyn

I'm trying to submit an article I wrote to the "Writing Tutorials" part of the knowledge base, and I keep getting this error message: Error geting users post stat DEBUG ...

Writing Fresh Prose and Poetry I've discovered that among writers there is some sort of invisible mythos that floats around trying to convince us that we must write a certain ...

Now that I've seen the original, I think I know why the hand on yours looks like it's palm-down (the blobbiness around it in the original is confusing). I would ...

Yeah, I actually think it looks really cool. The Water Cube or whatever looks fantastic, though - that looks like a rendering out of a video game or something. Very, ...

While there is quite a bit that was improved from your first draft to your second, I feel like you've introduced a little more explaining rather than showing. It's more ...

I made some general notes at the bottom of this, but my major qualms are (I guess) similar to most of the ones that have been noted above. Mainly, I ...

Yeah, I have a couple different playlists. Classical music is generally reserved for essays, because honestly, I can't listen to anything with words while I'm trying to write something as ...

OpenOffice might be the answer to all your prayers. Works isn't a bad program, but I know that my version won't open any .doc files (maybe it's an old one, ...

This is a book about tuna salad.

Woo, you are so brilliant! Sorry it took me forever to get to this. Can I kidnap Raven? She can read me bedtime stories. Please? *wibbles* Jiggity and others pointed ...

Wow, sorry for totally neglecting YWS for a month... after school let out, we... *cough* I kind of forgot that my computer existed for a while... which had both its ...

front garden: he squatted nonchalantly uprooting pink petunias why, i came after him, shovel in hand shouting who the hell are and what would you with my annuals “ma'am, we ...

C.S. Lewis used Till. C.S. Lewis did not use 'til. C.S. Lewis is awesome. Ergo, Till is awesome, and Till > 'til.

Sorry this took so long to review - it hits a little close to home right now. She was just sixteen, When she jumped into that car. Mama didn’t know ...

Hmm... Not much I can suggest to make this chapter better. Well, it's obvious that this is taking place later in your character's life, but how much later? The prologue ...