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Re: Fleurs
I was going to put borders on all of them and forgot except on the first one, so live with it, ha ha. For my fellow photographers: one of these ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Takaiya Bad
I agree with SoKool, the way you shade things makes the clothes look a little strange. Perhaps if you just outlined the folds instead of filling them in completely with ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Harris Beach Photography
1. This one is so cool! I wish the dude was a little farther to the left, but it's nice, regardless. 2. What is that - is it a cigarette ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Art by Alzz
Do you know that girl? One time my friend tried to rewind her film manually and then later unknowingly took pictures on top of it. When she had them developed, ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Claudestine
This is a nice start to a story; I like your finishing line. The concept is very good - I wouldn't have thought to write a story about an angel ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: the man who lost his shadow
The last couple sentences really confused me. Hopefully that's something you'll address in the next section of the story? It was kind of unclear to me at first that Edgar ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Your Influences
More rambling about history in a modern context- the Decemberists. The Shins, Sufjan Stevens, Cold War Kids Wow, your musical taste WINS. *high-fives* I ADORE the Decemberists - such an ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
P.S. Sorry if I used too many smilies! :) *is innocent* I'm like that when I'm super hyper like now! :O :D :P :) ^_^ ~Hannah~ You and niteowl will ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Ch. 1: On the Hogwarts Express
Aw, this is cute. I'm happy to see that people are already experimenting with the Epilogue characters - I'm glad that Jo left it open for us. I think in ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Livre OR Summer Reading
Which brings me right back to the idea that acrostic poems were made for 6-year-olds entering their first world of writing, and that to use them past this purpose isn't ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Welcome Perikov and JD! I'm glad that this site is growing. It's so much more active than... some other sites... yeah. :D
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Red Moon
Yeah, I'd have to agree. There's absolutely nothing wrong with including a bit of description or imagery in a poem, but there has to be something... there. Pure imagery needs ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Cody on the prowl
P.S. My name is really 'Inkblot on the face of the earth," but there wasn't enough room. :roll: so I'm stuck with it. But I like it that way! It's ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: Just Some Things...
You are cool. And well-traveled. France, Belgium, and Italy are nice. I think that Italy and Belgium are my favorite countries that I've visited... others were nice, but I wouldn't ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: The Silver Locket
One: This is not up to my usual standards, because I wrote it - the entire thing - in the middle of the night. I wanted to get it up ...
Aug 8, 2007
