Lynlyn

Pat Buchanan L9 all the way. It sounds so mysterious and intriguing!

I feel like maybe you *did* go over the top, if only a touch. On the other side of the road stood a number of flats. Tess wondered how they ...

Yeah, I have to admit that when I was reading the description of her vomiting in the first chapter I actually gagged because I was so grossed out. Whether or ...

Wow, I saw this on the front page and the first few paragraphs really drew me in - that doesn't happen too often. I wasn't expecting it to be in ...

Hey Quietus! Well, hopefully you'll have better luck here. We're a pretty amiable bunch, as far as writers go - we don't bite. I can't wait to see some of ...

Writersdomain pointed out some great stuff. I think that really the most important thing is to tug on the reader's heartstrings before and after the death - get them attached ...

If it's set in modern-day times, I just open up the telephone book, and there lies a treasure trove of material, fresh from life. If it's set in past times, ...

As a writer, I get a lot of advice about keeping a notebook. I never really believed it at first because I was never really the diary type. My family ...

Occasionally books and movies will do this - usually big epic ones based on works like Lord of the Rings and such. I'm much more likely to be inspired by ...

I was five. I had just seen the movie "The Mouse and the Motorcycle" and I was absolutely thrilled with it. I went home and wrote a story about it, ...

However, after I show it to someone else...THAT'S when I start to hate it. I'm happy with it grammatically and everything, I've run it through the YWS Nazi's and it's ...

I use rhetorical questions quite a bit in my poetry, I guess it's just because I'm the kind of person who asks a lot of questions. In fact, my poems ...

This poem is kind of funky because it seems to switch between seriousness and a strange kind of lightheartedness... it's not quite humorous though, I'm not sure I really understand ...

I really like this, and I must commend you for taking on this subject, as it's something that I feel strongly about and have never really been able to approach ...

This is a really cool concept. I especially like the line about "testing her new freedom" because that's when it goes from pure imagery to something narrative: you've given the ...