Lynlyn

This is really interesting. I liked this the second time around - the first time, I completely misread it. Let me demonstrate, so perhaps you can clarify for other silly ...

We don't get coverage in the US (big surprise there) unless they air it on BBC America and I missed it or something, but I always watch the clips on ...

If it helps, there are some clips of Get Your Own Back on Youtube. They've blurred out the kids' faces (don't really know why) but I think it used to ...

This is an interesting piece, and one with a lot of potential. It's clear that you know where you're going with this - you've probably got a lot of it ...

NYC surprised me a lot when I went. I did not run into even one of those "brusque NY" types I was supposed to meet. (I met a lot more ...

Yeah, it hurts a lot depending on the breadth of the area being pulled. I don't really know how to explain it. The areas that hurt the most are from ...

That said, the top of it is kind of ugly. It reminds me of an avocado for some reason. Why spend all that money on something that's only going to ...

Wow. This is definitely a bit heavier than the fantasy I read, with the whole "war of the clans" thing going on. And there's romance coming? I'm a little scared, ...

This is a short, sweet little piece. I agree that the latter portion is more lyrical, I think you "got into it" a bit more as you were writing. This ...

It...doesn't? This is a fanfic, just the names of the clans for it.... :? Yeah, but it's more like an outline than something people can comment on and critique. ^^ ...

"Text Block Writer" is sort of like that, but it simulates index cards rather than post-its. You can write things on cards and then shuffle them around. It's good for ...

I might be reviving a dead topic, but I love making maps. I never even wrote the story I drew this map for (this one was definitely done during school, ...

Ugly babies: is there such a thing? Some guy on my old debate team did a really good two-minute speech on that. It was really cute/funny/lighthearted. (His answer was "no.")

If you're talking about specific mechanics to convey the passage of time, you can always describe a clock, a watch, a sundial, shadows changing, the sun setting, et cetera. Your ...

I don't think there are any words that should be banned from writing - that's just absurd to me. If it's in the English language, it's fair game. But I ...