Lynlyn

Wow, I love your style, especially her face/expression. She looks really fierce. You take commissions? XD I agree that the wing in the back looks like it's placed a little ...

They're very very cute! I like the colors you used, they're a little more saturated than they are in the TV show/manga, so it looks really bright and happy. What ...

Nice to meet you to. I'll...try to find where the info is... I wasn't trying to be rude/nasty, I hope you didn't take it that way. D: That would make ...

My teacher probaly picked up things that Golding probably didn't even realise. Somehow, seeing as it's Golding, I doubt that. :lol: Every freckle on every character's face probably had a ...

I agree with the above comments (mark it on the calendar!). Everyone and their dog has been told to "show, not tell" with their fiction, but really it applies just ...

Abaab... cdccd...? I'm impressed, that's the first time I've seen that here. It gently trembles with a quake, I know this is for the purposes of rhyming, but I feel ...

I was thinking of writing my story in 11st person for the main character's POV and when it switchs to someone else, writing it in third person. A bit likt ...

Like someone else said, I'm not sure how well this would stand alone as a poem, but as lyrics it's a nice piece. I like the soft repetition, it sort ...

This is catchy and would make a good angry rock song, but I'm wondering how much trouble you're going to have with writing music that fits it (unless you've already ...

I'm a sudoku addict but I've never even tried the YWS sudoku. I guess I should give it a try. I mean, I've seen it there on the menu once ...

I loved those "Dear America" books- you know, those historical kids' journals? I thought those were really cool, but my life just never seemed that exciting. XD Ha ha, I ...

You've got a good start, and with some editing this could really shine. However, there are a couple of things that I'd like to see more of here: you need ...

I don't want to edit this just yet - experience has taught me that if I start editting the first chapter as I finish it, I'll never finish to Chapter ...

I just finished restricting pretty much everything by IP address such that you have to be in my house to even see the login page for the server. The first ...

Hey, how are you doing? I hope you're enjoying it here. We're a pretty fun bunch. Do you write fantasy fiction, then? That would make me so happy. I write ...