Lynlyn

Honey, you just made the mistake. The correct way is what you consider a mistake. ;) But isn't it always in the, er, "accusative" if it's in a prepositional phrase, ...

Not exactly the kind of stuff I usually read, but hey. Why "worst" instead of "worse"? The first part is interesting, it has a pretty steady rhythm and it holds ...

Thanks, these are some nice guidelines. I don't agree with a couple of them though - namely #7 and #10. The dictionary lists both of those "incorrect" usages as acceptable ...

First off, I hope you took these with a digital camera and not anything like an SLR/something with a telephoto lens, 'cause that could really screw up your eyes. I ...

Perhaps you could try uploading it to a site like and then using the IMG tags to post it here? We might have better luck if you did that, as ...

These are so neat! I wish we had pretty birdies like that around here. 1. This is really nice, you can almost hear the bird call just looking at it. ...

AHH. I LOVE YOU. First of all, congratulations on your familiarity with the best composer ever. And his best work ever. And pretty much the best auditory experience ever, ever, ...

No. It sounds really fun, but I haven't ever done it. Acting stuff out though, oh boy. We had a "detective club" in fourth grade where we used to act ...

I don't really care for the repeated "me" in the first paragraph, it's a little sing-songy (whereas the rest of the poem is a bit darker). The only thing that ...

Like most people said, I usually just get a word, phrase, or image stuck in my head, and then I work from there. Sometimes I feel the rhythm before I ...

I'm overjoyed that someone else knows Philip Larkin! Great stuff. I think that first person is like a magnifying glass: used well, it can reveal a lot of things that ...

What an excellent chapter! I must say, I really am stunned. I wasn't expecting that twist at all. Inter-group disagreements maybe, but wow, leaving Brad? I didn't see that one ...

Very cool. I have a lot of dreams about clocks . I like the idea, and the detail that you used to describe the little clock. One question though - ...

Hee, I really like this... do I sense romantic tension between Dmitri and Nora? Oooh. You've done a great job here, but a couple of things: There were one or ...

A surprise for me - I had imagined in the last chapter that Whisperba was a woman, not sure why. "Yes. It's a bright net stretched over us, holding us ...