Lynlyn

If we lock this thread, we should start & pin a new one.

I agree that a title change is in order. ;) Sweet demonic rapture. Ghosts and ghouls; satanic laughter. Pumpkins glowing bright. The only lantern for a souls delight. The slant ...

I have to agree with Cade's comments about the commas and such. I think you're sort of... over-punctuating. The second part of the poem with the dandelion is very nice. ...

I still have no plot beyond two scenes. I really don't know what I'm going to do at all once I finish this second one. And I think by then ...

So. You've got a poem. It's a fine poem, it has some effective lines - but in my opinion, it doesn't function very well as a whole. What a wonder ...

Magna Carta I: - High fantasy - Victorian settings - Steampunk - Characters who turn coats - Especially if their coats are well-tailored frock coats with polished little cufflinks. And ...

Yeah, same here! I'm never going to keep all of our names straight. I put my YWS name in my signature to perhaps provide some semblance of order, but... you ...

Somebody somewhere was having fun. Somebody call in the Puritans, quick! Mine: Anda had killed her last bear. Uhh, it makes sense in context?

Emo poetry is often unoriginal, unimaginative, and provides only for the author, not the reader. You may say that it's personal and not meant to be read by others, and ...

Rah! Such a cool concept. I like. I think your only problem here is that some of your sentence structures are a little awkward. Some of them are just very, ...

Heh, I thought of "FTW!" as well. Right now you've got a spark; touch it up and it could be a Roman candle. My main goat with this is that ...

I started reading when I was three years old - I don't remember what the first book was, and neither do my parents. I'm guessing it was probably one of ...

Yay, does the "click to talk" button work now? If so, maybe I'll call in this time.

What browser is everyone using? I just checked their FAQ and apparently it only works in Internet Explorer; the 'click to talk' button that is. I just tested this, and ...

As I stated before, it is possible to call in for free. If you have a microphone or headset attached to your computer, all you have to do is click ...