Lynlyn

Wow, these are really nice... you have so much talent. (I missed the deadline for the YWS art show as well.) The first painting is really cool, I like how ...

Aww, your dog is adorable! What a sweetheart. I've never had a pet, so whenever people post their cats and dogs I always feel so left out. I like the ...

I really love the second one! I don't think I'd be able to find half that much gold stuff in my house. The composition and the lighting are both so ...

No need to shut up. We love talkative folks here. We are writers, after all, so naturally we blabber on a bit. ;) Welcome to YWS! The folks in the ...

Hey, Senri! Wow, big dreams. :) Martial Arts has always been one of those things that I've always wanted to do, but never actually tried. I suppose I would devote ...

A small Chinese corpse watched wordlessly. You are continually knocking me dead with these awesome, awesome one-liners. So little and yet so much. I have to say that I like ...

This is really quite superb, as far as fiction goes. 8) I knew what he meant, “I wanted to check it out.” I think that a period instead of a ...

Most of what I was thinking has already been said, Proky. The only bit that realy threw me off was the "I did. We did." That sort of made it ...

I think on the whole we've probably already beaten this thing to death for you, but I have a couple comments. On the whole, this is still very gripping, but ...

Yes, you might as well tell us your favorite color and all that boring stuff now, because those people with the blue names want to know. They're rabid, man. Especially ...

I love fantasy too! In fact, that's almost all that I write. What do you mean by "realistic animal"? Just realistic depictions of animals in nature, or something like wolf ...

Sadly, I no longer have the parts I deleted, but you've inspired me to look back over this piece. I think I'll add more to the adventure of Alice and ...

This is really cool, almost like she's holding a will o'wisp. I wish I had a camera where I could set the exposure time so I could do something like ...

“That was the one Derek wanted to go on,” he said, his voice small. “We all couldn’t wait until it opened.” That was where I figured out that Jason was ...

I think that a lot of the things Griffinkeeper mentioned will help to draw in a little more realism. he only other thing that I think detracted from it was ...