Lydia1995

Hello Sillyducky! Happy Reviewing Day! I liked this! :) I agree with the others though, this wasn't particularly poetic. As Snoink said you need to shorten it to just the ...

Hello Spy! It's reviewing day so I'm here to review! :) Firstly I have to say that I agree with ROC, I got a little confused. I'll discuss this in ...

Hello! These pictures are really great! :) I'm not really great at reviewing photography but I really liked these, particularly the last one. I loved the light and exposure on ...

Hello Spork! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! It's great that you know the basics, but if you need any help then feel free to PM and I'll ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! I reckon that pretty much everything has been covered by everyone, but I thought I would just drop by and say ...

Jacob I wiped away my angry tears and smiled at Ginny and Helen. "Yeah," I said thoughtfully. I was glad that Ginny thought Rosey loved me, it was a nice ...

Hello Yoha! This is really good! I really like your use of description and the subject matter, very inventive! Ok, so I have a couple of suggestions that you could ...

Jakey I ran after Ginny only to be stopped by Pierce from even saying hello to Rosey. "I want to see Rosey!" I whined tears prickling at my eyes. I ...

Hello Firman! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! I just had to click on this thread when I read the title... so HELLO! :D It's great to have ...

Hello Tim! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time =D If you ever need anything then PM me xD (You now have four people to rely on!) ...

Jacob I pouted dissapointed that I had lost. Blueberry juice! Of all the things to spy! I licked my lips to wipe the juice away and quickly forgot to be ...

Jacob "B," Ginny said smirking. I screwed up my face in concentration. "B..." I said, thinking aloud. "B...Oh!" I said as I thought of something. "Brown tree!" Ginny shook her ...

Jacob I saw Ginny's bottom lip quiver and tears begin to trickle down her cheeks. I felt my eyes well up but I pushed my tears back and patted her ...

Jacob Ginny walked up to the blueberry bush and suddenly blueberries appeared. It was like magic! "Wow, cool," I said taking a handful and wolfing them down. They were sweet ...

Tootles "Hook is coming again! Let's go have some fun! I cheered as loudly as I good and grabbed up my stick and knife. I sharpened the stick quickly and ...