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Jacob "I love her more than anything," Han said sighing contentedly. I wasn't about to let this drop. I sauntered over to him and tugged at his shirt. "Not as ...

Hello Kingolions! I loved this! There were a couple of little nit-picks I noticed in this but overall it was really touching! Many thing s I have done wrong, but ...

Hello Creative! Back again to review! :) Ok so I liked this but not as much as your first one if I'm being honest. As HBgirl said you broke the ...

Hello Creative! I just reviewed your third Dear Lord poem :) I really enjoyed this. :) Again as I said for your third Dear Lord poem this would benefit from ...

Hello Creative! This was a very short but sweet poem and I kind of wished that you had elaborated more. The message you are conveying is very deep and there ...

Jacob "I love you," Han said quietly. "Ewww!" I whispered to Ginny who giggled slightly. I glanced at Helen who smiled down at me. "Someone will say that to you ...

Hello Razzleberry! Welcome Back! It's great to see you back again! I don't believe we met before so hello! *shakes hand* I'm Lydia! I will check out that blog if/when ...

Thanks for your feedback. This is still a little rough around the edges so nit-picks are welcome. The Buzz: Have you ever felt it? That fuzzy, wuzzy feeling, that buzz ...

Hello Elite Husky! I liked this, to be short and sweet. :) I thought you captured the character of the doctor well. Am I right in thinking that this is ...

Hello Scarlett! I really enjoyed this, it was truly a great idea and it was really well executed. Just a couple of things I noticed: If you ever got a ...

Hello Autumn! I loved this! It was really deep and emotive. I have a just a couple of tips to help you make your poem more descriptive and to make ...

Hello Daniel! I just replied to your Welcome Area post! :) Ok, on to your poem. This is really great for your first post. You have structure in there and ...

Hello Daniel! Welcome to YWS! :) I hope you enjoy yourself! Tell your friends that they rock for getting you to signup! It's great to have new blood on the ...

Ok spy, I hope I helped. It's cool that you're learning a new language :) I'm doing french but I'm definately not good enough to write a poem in it ...

Hello Sarah! I really like this. I've always had a problem with drawing birds so I thought the head was brilliant! I love the idea of this. I've never really ...