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Re: Yello! : )
Hello Sadhana! It's great to see you back! Though I don't think we ever met before! I'm Lydia *shakes hand* :) I look forward to reading some of your work! ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Making Tea
Thanks Irish! I'm thinking of doing another one, this time Making a Sandwich. I'm thinking of ideas at the moment :) I'll tell you when I post it.
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Making Tea
Hehe! Thanks Snoink for those word of wisdom! (note to self sad/depressing is not necessarily a failure it is just deep!) :lol:
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #2)
Hello Sol! Here as requested to review :) It seems as though Yuri and various other people have gone through the little nit-picky grammar things with you and I'm not ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Making Tea
Thanks guys! Snoink- yeah I see where you are coming from, I kind of failed with the ending. I was thinking maybe the person could be some sort of alien ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Making Tea
This is really random and I wrote it just for fun. It's not much of a story so I would like ideas on how to develop it if you have ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Two sonnets, for Navita's Delight (tm).
Hello Helpful McHelpful Pants! I loved these, you had the Sonnet form correct which is great! :) And the subjects are really cool! I have literally nothing bad to say ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Hey. I'm new.
Hello PunkPrincesss! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! (Thought it sounds like you already are) :) Oooh! I love sparks of inspiration, give me a bell when you ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Am sorry
Thats, quite alright :) I hope I helped :D
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Am sorry
Hello Huthaifa! I liked this! There are a couple of pointers here thought that I would like to go through. English isn't your native language so this is impressive :) ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: im new
Hello Cxbar! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! :) This site is full of rather mad people who love to write and I welcome you to join us! ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: An Ode to Beauty
Hello Zaddie! I agree that this was a bit all over the place but the imagery you used made up for it. You may want to rearrange some of your ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Lily
Hello Butterfingers! I really liked this, I loved the imagery used. I do agree, however, with Kingolions in that I thought this could have been expanded more. There is so ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Heyo!
Hello Butterpants! Awesome intro :) Loving it! There is even a script forum that you can post your scripts in and get reviews :) You like acting to!?! *high fives* ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: wHAT Up BABies!
Hey Rosie! Welcome to YWS! Lovely drawing by the way, I wish I had talent like yours. As the others have said we even have a forum for Art and ...
Jul 5, 2010
