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Re: The Voices Of The Dead
The signal what does it say, I can’t see it. Red? Amber? It’s amber, lets continue on our way. The trains are on the same line. They are going to ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Stuck for a name chapters 1-3 (edited)
Hello, Midnightread! Well firstly lets just say that I liked this and I would like to read on. PM me when you write more. As for a title I havn't ...
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Re: The Ruin of Daroder
Hello! Like Amy, I really enjoyed this, it was smooth and very easy to read and the rhythm was very even and regular throughout. I also like the subject matter ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Blue Ice Fire...chapter 1
Hello, I'm Lydia! Well first I would like to start of by saying that I really enjoyed that and that you had me hooked. PM me when you write more ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Friendship
Hello, I'm Lydia! Well first off I would like to start by saying that I liked this, it was short and to the point. My problems are the same as ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: January 2010 Could Set a Reviewing Record...
Great! Lets get reviewing people. :D
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Secret - prologue + ch. 1
Hello! I'm Lydia. I have to say that I really liked this and that I like Lee-Anna couldn't find anything wrong with it so well done! The only thing I ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Love
Hello! I like this but it is too short and sweet. Love is very complicated and one stanza just dosn't cover it. Also the word 'burry' should be 'bury' with ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Grandma [Edit]
Hello all, this is just an idea I had. You can nit pick I'm not bothered. :D ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Grandma, you meant everything to
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: War Stories
Hi, I also really liked this piece and I agree with Amy (Aqua) your rhyme scheme isn't forced which is great. I also think that you need to work on ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The Banners Torn
Hello! Nice To Meet Yoy I'm Lydia! :P Wow you got alot of response for this poem and I have to say that this is going to get a bit ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Last
Hello Rebel (nice Username by the way!) :D Well as has been previously said I really liked this however I did find myself cursing your rhymes. You could use a ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Pay Heed!
Hello, I'm Lydia and I will be you reviewer today, Firstly I will start off by saying that I thought you did a very good job with the old English. ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: A Man Walks Through My House
Hello, :D I have read your short story the enchanted house and I can now see where you got your inspiration from. I like this poem though the rhythm was ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: A Dragon
I really like this picture I myself find it very difficult to draw dragons so I was very impressed by this. My one complaint is that I wanted to see ...
Jan 13, 2010
