Lydia1995

Hello! Wow. Well done! This is your first attempt at drawing birds well its amazing so well done! The only problem is one if the birds head looks a bit ...

Hello, Firstly let me just say that I like this however it was MUCH too Twilighty, in fact it was almost as though you pulled it straight from twilight. But ...

Just an idea that came to me a minute ago so I thought I'd post it and see what you guys thought :D ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Suffering

Hello, I really liked this, the rhythm was consitent except in one place where you wrote And simple routines you go through become a crime This was a little long ...

Hello, Midnight. Thanks again for commenting on my work. Now I unlike Amy (Aqua) have read your first 3 chapters. I am going to correct a couple of small things ...

Wow Durrie! I really like this, well done. Yes it's on lined paper but hey everyone likes to doodle and this was very good. I like the contrast and I ...

Thanks Midnight, and yes it is what happens before. All your other questions should be cleared up. I'll tell you when I write more! :D

Hello, Welcome to YWS! Ok so first off I will talk about this as a poem. I liked it and I liked the rhythm. I found some of the rhyming ...

Hello, cosby Now I have to admit that I didn't read all of this as it was a bit long. However what I did read was very good and I ...

Hello, I really liked this! Your rhymes wern't forced and your rhythm was regular. The title had me a little confused to begin with because I thought this would be ...

Hello BondGirl, Thanks for your feedback. The voicemails were people who were ringing the phones of the dead people and of course they cant reply. It was an idea I ...

Hello, as Dreamer said this is just going to be a repetition of what other people have said but I liked this poem so I had to write something! You ...

Hello Death Star, Welcome to YWS. Well firstly I liked this, it was good. I won't bother nitpicking about grammer because I have to dash in a minute. But one ...

Guardian: Title: Alicia Personality: Is cruel to the divers to begin with because she is jealous of them and their freedom to explore above the water. She is quite dark ...

Hey there! I have a question, and I can't find the right forum to put it on, so I'm going to try it here. I've been reviewing things, and posting ...