Lydia1995

Lila, Tristan sighed. "At least we have found everyone now." he said. I nodded. "Lets head back," I suggested. We made our way back to the camp Tristan leading and ...

Cate, I moved back to the oxugen tube and queued up to fill my tank. Thaniel came up behind me. He jabbed me in the ribs playfully. "Ouch" I said ...

Lila, Tristan called out to me. "Come on, let's go and find the others. And Kaladore." Kaladore turned to look at him. "No sleeping." I picked up my sword and ...

Cate, "Do you think its, y'know, inhabited?" I asked turning to Thaniel. He shrugged, "It might be I guess. Maybe theres a way out down there." He wondered aloud. Angler ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I see that you have already had the low down on various things so I'll just say hello. Feel free to PM me if you have ...

Juni Thanks for the ideas, actually it's a train crash but hey its very similar :P I'll work on that and try and post it up soon :)

Hello, I really liked this, was I right in thinking that in a way it was two poems in one. Because the rhyme scheme for all the bits about the ...

Re-draft complete you can find the new version in Fantasy Fiction Hello all, Nit-picks are most welcome :P Prologue: I crouched on the floor, examining the tracks. They were fresh ...

Heather, As much as I didn't trust Rob I decided to go with him. Eating fish was better than stabbing monkeys for food. I couldn't stand violence, but I equally ...

Lila, I was pleased that Kaladore had stepped in and I went after him to retrieve my horse from where it was tethered. As I approached I noticed that something ...

Heather I woke up from a fitful sleep. I looked around, it was dark but I could make out the roof of the cave. I remembered where I was. I ...

Lila, I laughed at Kaladore, but hovered my hands over his wound muttering to myself. My hands glowed green and his wound closed. "Thanks." He said. I smiled. "No problem." ...

Lila, We were in a lot of trouble, Kaladore had already been hit and who knew what had happened to Sam and Esony. I nodded in agreement to Kaladore's comment. ...

Heather, I went with the other girls to help gather wood for a shelter. In truth I was scared, I didn't know where I was, or where my mum was ...

Lila, I was a little dissapointed about not being able to fight the dragon as I wanted to prove myself to the others who regarded me as the baby in ...