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Re: Untitled Story
Hello! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today :) Firstly Welcome To YWS. You have come to a good place were people can help you to improve ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Incognito Art Gallery [ 01/26/10 ]
Hello! I don't really normally review Art but I really liked this. I agree with some that your shading was lost in places, but that was probably your scanner! Well ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: i am an idiot
Vanadis, This is pretty good. The rhythm was a bit out but for someone who dosn't generally write poetry this is great! Well Done! I loved it aticularly some of ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Kaelynne's LOve Story
Hello White! I see that everyone has pulled this apart already so I'll just say that I liked it. You portrayed the emotion of the only girl without a boyfriend ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: zimbabwe
Europe, nice. I can see why you'd miss Zimbabwe though, Europe must be a little dull after that :D
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Life: A Game of Tag
Hello! As others I liked it, I was a bit dissapointed with the end though. 'He wins' seemed a bit anit-climatic. You could put something really dramatic in here for ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: zimbabwe
Hello, I liked this, but I think that if you really want to portray your emotions, tell us how you felt leaving. I know the feeling of moving house, and ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Hands I
Hello, Wow, this is really good, well done! My only complaint is tha tit is huge and so I can't see the whole thing, maybe you could upload it as ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: German Shepherd pup
Hello! I love this and I'm sure that your friend did, it is really cute. As had already been mentioned, the paws are a little off, but hey I was ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: They say love.
Hello, I really like this, it has a clear message, that yes you don't always get what you deserve and that love is never easy. So i really like it, ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: The Prologue. (prologue) not so long anymore!
Hello again! Much like what the person above said, you do a bit too much telling. But other than this I think its going to be a good read, I ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: The Prologue. (prologue) not so long anymore!
Hello, Welcome YWS Unfortunately I don't have the patience to read all of that, nor the time. I would suggest breaking this up into chapters so that this huge amount ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Survive on an Island...or else.
Heather, The search group was decided, it would be me Lacy and Rob. Leaving Sasha here to help Vashi along with the new guy, Ben. We set off to the ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Manga-two girls
Hello! Wow, this is really great, I cannot draw manga very well. The only critisism I have is that I have to crane my neck to look at it, If ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: The Fallen Apple
Hello! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer today. :D Ok so to start with I noticed that you haven't done any reviews, try to review more peoples work ...
Jan 28, 2010
