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Rose, I had finished healing but I realised that I wasn't going to be able to make it through here on my own. I made it out of the level ...

I really like a lot of books, some of my faveourites though... 1) Harry Potter Series 2) The Chronicles of Narnia 3) Of Mice and Men 4) Chaos Walking Series ...

Rose, Rose moved to level 46 bringing her staff around expecting enemies. But none came, this is very weirdse she thought. She crept further forward, into more trees and found ...

Hello Midnightread! :D Hmmm....interesting, the nit-picks have already been done I see, so there is nothing left for me to do except... *goes to read Chapter one* (Sorry I was ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Journalism sounds cool, though its not my personal ambition. Good Luck! :) Anyways, :backtotopic: I hope you have a good time here on YWS! It is ...

Heather, "Hey look, over there!" I pointed through the trees where a shimmering reflected light was coming from. "Do you think?" I asked but Lacy was already running through the ...

I think it depends on the character of the wizard, we don't know your character so we can't really give a great view. I can see why an old wizard ...

Hello! I really liked this, it's not often that you see poems that go into so much detail about everything. I liked your description and you clearly put all your ...

Hello iCarlyfan! I really loved the film Avatar, and I assume as you are going to write more of this that it will have something before this moment, because for ...

Hello! I really liked this, your rhyme was great. I think that the use of dream worked but didn't at the same time, it seemed a little cliché. Maybe you ...

Hello Rune, Oh it's a shame that your email got hacked, but your going about keeping your computer safe the right way. I don't believe that we have met before! ...

Hello, I agree with Conrad. I can't quite work out what you are trying to tell me as the reader here. It just looks like a list of words. If ...

Hello Wiggy! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! If you have any questions feel free to PM me and I'll try my best to answer them, or there ...

Ooh I shouldn't, I really really shouldn't... Oh go on then, one more can't hurt :D Name: Rose Age: 15 Appearance: Eye Colour- Electric blue Hair Colour- White but with ...