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Re: i can open your eyes.
Hello Pooja! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself. Do you like to make new friends then you can check out the chat room and meet people in there ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Hello People!
Hello Izumi! Welcome to YWS! It's great that you already know people on here :D But if you would like to make other writing buddies as well then check out ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
Alicia "This way." I said to the land-dwellers. Urtagh came around the corner. "Alicia, what are you thinking? We must dispose of these land-dwellers immediately, we cannot have them knowing ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: The World: Pluto Kiss.
Rose, I watched as both Luna and Eden dissapeared. I glanced around me at the mini boss who was still lumbering around catching his arm. A little number appeared at ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: The Loving Ghost
Hello! I liked this, you had me hooked but it took a little while to get into it. The description was good though. A couple of nit-picks that I noticed ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello Anchees, To get points you need to review other peoples stuff. You can get a maximum of 100 points per review, or something like that. Anyways Welcome To YWS! ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: The World: Pluto Kiss.
Rose, I downed some of the mini bosses blood. I hadn't realised about this glitch. I was beginning to be really glad that I had found this group. I dodged ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Run Short Prologue.
Thanks Coco. I am still unsure where this is going to leave, I need to do a plot line or something. But thanks for the review. I might cut out ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Run Short Prologue.
Hello. I am really stumped as to which idea to carry on with at the moment out of the numerous prologues I seem to be writing. This is another, if ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: The World: Pluto Kiss.
Rose, I threw a leech at a tree and slashed through another with my sword. It felt good. The I saw Peri, he had taken the health potion and Luna ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: A nice joke speech!
Hello! I liked this, I'm not going to critique this because thats not what its there for..? It is just there to entertain :D And it did. Though I have ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: I'm new here! Care to help me out?
Hello Munchkin! Welcome to YWS! I see that you have had the lo-down from everyone else. Ooh! I love Fireflies by Owl City, I listen to it when I'm stuck ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Hello world, I'm new here :D
Hello Eigee! Cool screen name by the way! Welcome To YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself :D Two books, cool. That's kind of like me, more than one piece on ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
Cate, I looked across at Thaniel. He shrugged. "One wrong move. He could have been more specific." I nodded, wondering what one earth would be bad enough to get us ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Tree
Hello Jenthura. I love this drawing, and I like the way that the children are all playing on the tree. I think that you could have spaced the leaves out ...
Feb 3, 2010
