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Re: hello evryone
Hey! Welcome to YWS :) I hope you enjoy yourself. I love writing novels as well and I am currently working on one which I'm really really enjoying it's sort ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Swing Chapter 1 Re-Draft
I uploaded this a while ago but have now gone back and had another look at it as well as started writing the rest of the novel again. Last time ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Lost in Love
Hey Kagi! Wow, that was a very short story haha :) But I actually like it, it's nice and simple and that's a good thing it allows for us to ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey everyone! :) I am back seeings as all my exams are pretty much over now, so I can turn my attention back to writing :)
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: What you don't see
Hi Karzkin, pleasure to meet you :) I really enjoyed your poem! I loved the vocabulary you used and I also liked the repetition of the last two lines in ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Black and white paintings
I agree with everyone the converse one is just WOW! :) I love it and I thought it was a photo too so great job. I couldn't see the first ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Just Four
Four letters changed my life, just four, not one more. You may wonder what they were, Love? I thought it was. He was charming, gentle and sweet. Fate decided we ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Night Scene
Thanks everyone! Lilymoore - Thank you for your feedback I will look at those things for another time. :) ~Lydia
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Night Scene
This is something I created in Fireworks. :)
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Lust or Love?
Hey :) I'm here to review :) Right so I thought this was good in some ways but it could definately be improved. I'm not going to dwell on nit ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Drift
I made a few changes to this poem. I uploaded it a while back during the writing olympics. Hope everyone enjoys it. Sorry if you've read it before. I should ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: You got what you wanted...
Okay thanks everyone for your comments they mean a lot. In case anyone is interested I based this on a monlogue that I read recently which really hit home to ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: A Sort Of Drawing
Hey :) When I look at this I see a fish more than a flower but then if I look at it more closely then I see a flower again. ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Red Flower
Hey Bluewaterlily :) Just had to say that I love these. Especially the second one. I think your angle on it is a lot more creative and inspiring than the ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Through My Skin
Hello Persephoneia. Lydia is here to review this. Let's start by saying that I liked it, I haven't read any poems on racism recently and this was a nice change ...
Nov 18, 2010
