Lydia1995

Hello! Welcome back! We haven't met before, as I only joined this year, I'm Lydia *shakes hand* Yes I understand that the site has changed a lot, I hope you ...

Daisy, This should probably be in the Storybook discussion thread but I will answer anyway: My advice is to come up with an original idea that has many opportunities for ...

Name: Jessica (Jess) Short Age: 17 Gender: Female Personality: She loves nature and anything about it however she has only been studying for a couple of years so she dosn't ...

Aww Mr Knightley I feel your pain... I posted a terzanelle thinking that it was a variation of a villanelle when really it was just a different poem. I had ...

This is my first storybook so we will see how this goes. Plot: You go to a real safari in South America, complete with all the major Safari animals, snakes ...

Hello Anuha! Welcome to YWS! Ok, I am going to review your poem, I will give my overall comments at the end, so first some little nit-picks. [quote]I hope I ...

Oh yeah. I have never noticed that before now. Cool, The badges will be good.

My grammer used to be terrible, but now I have improved a lot and I see mistakes in my own work, which is very helpful.

Rose, "Lets just make it through this dungeon and get back to the guild. Maybe Peri will be there." Luna nodded. Eden petted her beetle, it was getting to be ...

Hello Jarred, I am reviewing this in response to your email. Firstly let me just say Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy yourself. Now then onto the review. I ...

Heather, "Oh, nothing. I'm just glad to see you out and about I guess. But I thought Sasha had you under lock and key?" I asked. Vashi strolled up to ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Yes yes yes! Join the Writing Olympics like Mizz said. :D Anyways i play the flute too *high fives* it is great. Do you take grades? ...

Rose, The storm was wild and Peri was gone. Luna was devastated. "Peri! Peri!" She called into the darkness. But no-one replied. I wondered why the guild had sent us ...

Hello BlueKangaroo! Welcome to YWS! We also have a lot in common and I have to say this but I love the Prince of Egypt, it is my all time ...

Yep sure thing Midnightread. :D And thanks for reading.