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BenFranks your review is done :D Well Done, it was a great Prologue.

Hello BenFranks, I'm here as requested. This prologue is amazing. Your description and word choice are really fabulous, they gave me a clear picture in my mind which is important ...

Hello BeKWithak! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today. This was a nice beginning, with the whole transported back in time thing going on. Well Done. I ...

Need a review? I don't bite :P I will review anything in the following forums: Action/Adventure Fiction Fantasy Fiction Romantic Fiction Other Fiction Science Fiction Dramatic Poetry Lyric Poetry Narr

Hello Madeline (I have a sister with that name!) Welcome to YWS! I hope that you enjoy yourself. I haven't been around long, only since the start of this year ...

Jess Tori sighed with relief as Steve came back onto the bus without the spider. "I hate spiders. I have a phobia of them," she stated matter of factly. Vera ...

Hello ScarlettFire :D Welcome to YWS! I hope that we can help you to improve your writing and hopefully you will be able to get published. Drop by in chat ...

Jess Another new person joined our tour group and already Steve was throwing her a muffin. "Well that takes care of the last muffin. At least the rhinos won't fight ...

Hello again, Well Done! This is another great chapter, this is shaping up to be a really great story. Again just watch were you use your commas and periods, you ...

Hello WarioFart! Ok so I really liked this, you kept me gripped. You have corrected all of the mistakes except this one that I noticed: We can’t go know, since ...

I will make Rory evil, he can just have a twisted view of people because of the problems he had before.

Jess, I took a muffin from Steve and laughed along at Beth's mad lion display. I noticed Vera looking a little left out. I nudged Steve and whispered. "Offer one ...

I'll join! Kaywiia I will play the part of your brother. Name: Rory Age: (9-15) 14 Power/s (if known): He can control people to an extent. He cannot make them ...

Hello Wariofart!? (Odd username, but quite cool :D) Ok so anyway, Welcome To YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself, actually it looks that you are already enjoying yourself. I will ...

Jess, I was sat next to Steve on the bus. The new girl was in front of me, I tapped her on the shoulder. "Hi, I'm Jess." I said shaking ...