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Rory I was dragged away by the worker. Damn! I hadn't realised that Foster was so powerful, no wonder that he was in charge. I was taken into a scientific ...

Sorry everyone, I have kind of lost my character in this storybook so I'm going to drop out. Sorry, good luck creating funny scenes. Bye! (You may fire Ilona from ...

Hello Valetine, Your review is complete, sorry for the delay, I had exams. :D Hope I helped.

Rory, I heard Foster threatening Ashley beside me, or at least thats what it sounded like from here. I pushed out to his mind but found it blocked with that ...

Hello Valentine, here is the critique as promised. Sorry that it took so long. I haven't read the previous chapters but I am pleased to say that this made me ...

Rory: After Ashley's explosion of power two workers had come in and taken her away. My sister had come running down the corridor muttering something about an metamorphic and I ...

Rory, I entered the room to find Ashley curled on her bed breathing deaply. "Ashley, what's going on?" I asked sitting on my bed opposite her. She didn't look up ...

Glad I helped Maddy :D GOod Luck with your editing, PM me if you decide to post it up and I'll review it for you.

Hello Valentine, I am busy with exam revision at the moment, I will get around to your request as soon as I can. I wil try to do it tonight ...

Name: Lila Reece Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Short and Pixie like with wavy brown hair and deep brown eyes. She is quite thin and has and air about her. ...

I like that plot, I can write drastic :D I don't really have any suggestions for that at the moment but I will have a think.

Rory: I sat back down with my lunch only to see that Ashley was clutching the table clearly under a lot of stress. The girl called Hero looked at her ...

Chrissie Black/Ilona Breeze "Sorry, love!" Shouted Bond as he ran away towards the forest again. "Damn!" I yelled kicking up a flurry of sand. The other girl ran off in ...

Chrissie Black/Ilona Breeze "SORRY I'M LATE!"I yelled as I ran along the beach trying to find someone, anyone who knew what was going on. My breakfast felt really heavy and ...

Rory: The bell for lunch plealed loudly. The girl stood up. "Come on Rory." "How do you know my name!" I demanded, she sighed. "Your sister called you Rory when ...