Lydia1995

Hello Stori, I really enjoyed your imagery in this, it was staggeringly beautiful and I really felt as though I was there. I did want a little more, but you ...

Hello Aspiring, I really really enjoyed this. You captivated me right from the start with the title - which was extremely intresting. I noticed a couple of typos and I'll ...

Hello Biffle! This was a good little poem. I liked the title, by the way. It is what made me want to read this in the first place. I did ...

Hey Kitrosemon! This has got the making of a great poem. You have some beautiful imagery in this but you have to watch sometimes that it doesn't become cliche. I ...

Hey Kitrosemon, I'll take a look at that poem for you if you like :D I'm glad you are getting on ok on the site. If you need anything else ...

Hello Jolene! Welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* It is very nice to meet you. I am Lydia or you can call me Lyds :D If you are unsure where to ...

Woah! This took off over night :D Jacob I didn't know what was happening. The man who had found me had said he was going to look for Paul. But ...

Hello Emmy! Ok so this poem was quite nice. I liked the idea that the MC or the voice of the poem wasn't just infatuated with their lover but they ...

My character profile is on the DT :D Jacob I opened my eyes as I realised that the sun was streaming through the trees. "Mummy?" I asked sitting up and ...

Hey Isha, I'm ready to join as promised. :D Name: Jacob Gender: Male Age (5-18): 7 Personality: He is a timid, innocent little boy but once he gets to know ...

Hello Hannah! Welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* It's very nice to meet you. I am Lydia :D First things first I really hope that you enjoy your time here. I ...

This is still a little rough around the edges but I hope that you will enjoy it. Thanks for your critiques :D Chapter 5 My first mistakes “Lila, wake up,” ...

Hello Mortimer! Welcome to YWS! I see that you have already had the 'lowdown' from everyone. I hope that we can help you to improve! I know all the lovely ...

Love it!! :D

Hello Knightly Angel! I really enjoyed your poem. Yes it was a cheesy but I pushed that aside and I really liked it :D Just one thing: All the sparks ...