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Re: The Curb (Started | Full)
Sally Hawke ¦ Salacin Corp. I sat in my swivel chair in the Research and Development office staring intently at my computer screen as live satellite footage of the target ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Hello, I'm a newbie!
Hey Cam :D Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself! Your friend/classmate recommended a good site! I have been here a while now and really love YWS you can ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees
Name: Helena Collings Age(18+): 19 Appearance (no anime): This but scruffier with a more street type look about her. History: She ran away from home when she realized her dad ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Hello, I had the same problem as Tanya about the sidebar going crazy. I copied and pasted a chapter of my book and went to make edits but every time ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: The Movie Marathon Equation
Enjoy :D Take films, popcorn plus addictive sugary sweets add blankets and friends. Minus sleeping and parents, times by fun to make movie marathons.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: The Curb (Started | Full)
I'm up for being a researcher if you'll have me :) Name: Sally Hawke (Sal to friends and colleagues) Age: 25 Gender: Female Personality: Sally is quite reserved and calm ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Real or not?
Haha :lol: I loved this and really enjoyed it :D You gave me a good laugh and it is also a rally interesting idea! I almost wish it were true ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Painting
Hey Mello :) I really enjoyed your poem I LOVE the imagery it really works :) I have a few little nit-picky comments to make though first :) A blank ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: hi
Hey Paige :) Welcome to YWS! Don't worry - here people will take interest in you and your writing, writing can also be an outlet for those feelings so I'm ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: No Happy Ever After
Hey, I really enjoyed your poem :) I thought you dealt well with the rhyme scheme - it didn't deem forced in anyway. But I agree with Jasmine in that ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Anxiety
Hey :) I agree with the other two - you definately need punctuation or if no punctuation then your lines need to feel like they have a natural end. Which ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: (no name)example peice
Hey Ire :) Firstly let me start by saying that I like the ideas behind your piece. I can relate to that idea and almost need to fit in and ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Summer
Hey Justagirl :) Firstly to say I really like this :) And from this I can conclude that HAIKU'S DO LIKE YOU! :D One thing though the structure of a ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Ahoy!
Hey Andrea :) WELCOME TO YWS! I'm Lydia :D I hope you enjoy yourself as much as we all have on here. Ah I know that feeling all too well! ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: A dreame
Hey Secret! First I'll just say welcome to YWS seeings as you are quite new here :) Anyway onto your poem. I liked it especially this line: a dream of ...
Jun 7, 2011
