Lydia1995

Jacob I walked back over to the fire. "They are all very hungry!" I said proudly to Helen. Helen smiled and knelt down to my height. "Thanks very much for ...

Jacob Helen gripped my hand and led me over to the fire. I didn't argue. I could see that Rosey needed some time alone. I glanced over to what Zanea ...

Hey Aspiring, Again a very nice piece. It really takes us deeper into the world of this New India :D One typo I noticed that I'll point out to save ...

Woah! Stelagineva summed that up for me in that above post. Wow. Wow. Wow. WOW! That was so captivating and amazing! Just one thing I noticed, when you ahve a ...

Hello Chelsea *cough...cough* The Eaves Dropper :D Welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* I hope you enjoy your time on the site and I hope that this site is enough to ...

Hello Aley! Welcome to YWS! *Throws confetti* I hope that our reviews don't cause you to growl at your computer! I'm sure that you will find loads of people who ...

Thanks to the both of you, these were really helpful comments :D Thanks for the suggestion about finding a thread on commas, I never really know where to put them! ...

Jacob I watched Han walk up and down irritably. I could tell he wanted to know what was going on; he kept muttering to himself. I turned back to Lex. ...

Hey Shubi, I have something you can review if you like - The other chapters are under the possibly related items tab if you want to read them but you ...

LOL! Hey Blair/Thingletoodle! :D Welcome To YWS! *throws confetti* I am Lydia or you can just call me Lyds :D Hmm, I don't really know what you should write in ...

Jacob One minute I was playing with Lex and the next I was scooped up by Rosey, then she dropped me because a nasty man was there and I was ...

Jacob I was dragged by the hand by one of the big people who I didn't know. It was scary running away, but I just ran. The big person stopped ...

Hello BrokenWing! Welcome to YWS, by the way. I happened to notice the date you joined :D Ok so this was a really cute little piece. Just some pointers: In ...

Jacob Rose slung me and Lex off her back. I glanced around for this Anna person. When Rose stepped forward I couldn't stop myself from saying, "But your name is ...

Hello Ski! This was so sad, and sick and horrible at the same time and the worst thing is is that it could actually be true... I can't imagine killing ...