Lydia1995

Hope you enjoy them xD I’m tucked up in bed, so deliciously cosy. Nothing can hurt me. Something behind me, I can feel it watching me, I feel my fear ...

Jacob I watched as Zan ran into the trees. "Will she be coming back?" I asked. Rosey nodded. Content with her reply I lay down next to her and yawned. ...

Thanks to you both. :D Kanade I will PM you if I ever write anymore Haiku. Jane, I also thought that line was a little off, I will see what ...

Jacob I started awake as I heard AnnaRose's startled whisper. "Rosey?" I asked groggily. She turned to me and smiled. "It's ok Jakey, you can go back to sleep," she ...

Wheeling above me, seagulls cry their symphonies, I embrace the sea. I cut through the waves. I don’t even try to breathe. This is what I want. Drowning seemed peaceful, ...

The rush of surf on the sand, the calm of the boat on the sea, hoping to drift back to land. Ripples as I dip in my hand, It is ...

This is amazing! It is a well deserved featured work well done! The bluriness really reminds me of water and I cannot actually fault it! *Likes* ~Lydia

Hello Skicrazyallday, I really enjoyed this, it was a quirky little piece and I didn't see the twist coming which was great! There were a couple of little things I ...

Hello Hobbit :D I really enjoyed your poem and it is, of course, very true. There were a couple of things I noticed: Though not all of them whole or ...

Jacob I felt a hard grip on my arm. I screamed for Rosey and for Zanea and for anyone to help me. "We've got a hostage! Let's go!" I heard ...

Jacob I stared in awe at the fight. Something inside me was screaming at me to help out with the fight but as Helen kept levitating me and Ginny off ...

Hello Fighta! Welcome to YWS! It's very nice to meet you :D I'm Lydia, or you can call me Lyds. I love jelly beans and ice cream and cookies too ...

Jacob Rosey knelt down to my height. "Jump on kiddo," she said helping me up. Helen came up to me and gave me a strip of the meat from the ...

Hello Shubi! I enjoyed this prologue, it made me want to read the rest of the book which is really great :D There were a couple of things that I ...

Hello Aspiring! A really moving end to your competition entry. I love it. I see now why the monkeys stealing the fruit was so significant. I loved your description throughout ...