Lydia1995

Anyone a frozen fan here? :D

Hey there HockeyFan! I'm here to review - this time hopefully it won't get deleted! Right so you know the drill, nit-picks first and then general comments. “Mandi, do you ...

Hey! Sorry I will get round to reviewing this! I just did in fact but I took so long YWS logged me out and then deleted what I had written! ...

Thanks in advance for your feedback! Some of you may have read this before - but I have since tweaked it - I'm mostly looking to see whether there are ...

Hi there Storyguy! I'm Lydia and I'm here to review your piece. I hope I don't say anything which offends you but if I do feel free to totally disregard ...

Thanks Dementor! :)

Hi there! I'm Lydia and I'm here to review your chapter! :) I'll start by saying that I really liked this! I'm going to go through with nit-picks first and ...

Hey everyone, I'm on a bit of a reviewing go slow at the moment and need some specific things to review. My reviews usually have some nit-picky things (if required) ...

Hey there, I'm Lydia, here to review! This is a redraft right? I liked it, it was very gripping and I definitely wanted to read more - so when you ...

Hello there! It's Lydia here to review! This was quite a long piece - in future you should really post one chapter per topic or it put's people off reviewing. ...

Hi there! I'm here to review. Firstly I'd like to say that I really enjoyed your first chapter! I won't bother too much about the nitpicky things as I'm sure ...

Sally R&D Office "I know. It's going to be an interesting next few weeks. Hey you fancy grabbing a drink? If we don't celebrate this then what will we, eh?" ...

(OOC: Sorry I haven't posted I've been away from this all - ready to get into this now though :) ) Helena: "Please stop," I was crying I couldn't help ...

Sally ¦ R&D Office "What's going on? Why has the van stopped?" Mikael asked peering closely at the screen. "I don't know. I can't see." I replied tapping keys furiously ...

Sally ¦ R & D Office "They're still fighting," Mikael said grimly. "It's fine, they'll get them," I said staring at the computer screen. "As far as I can tell ...