Lycanstyle01

The chest looks weird when compared to the outstretched arms. Is this supposed to be anime? Because if it is, I'll say you did good. If not, you probably drew ...

I loved the mystery and suspence that you create in the story. Also, I think that you did a good job when you jumped out with sudden information that helped ...

I completely understand the story. Right now, the only thing I should suggest that this should be moved to the "adventure" section.

Toward the end, bad need of commas. Plus, the colon in the last sentence. Revise your grammar.

The plot is similar to when Zeus and his mighty god-friends fought with the Titan's. Not extremely similar, but it has a resemblance.

I'll take your advice.

Yes, establish the setting and more characterization.

I don't need a FULL explanation of a plot. Only a novice would do that in the prologue. And yes, I have noticed that what you just wrote was the ...

I have absolutely no idea what this is about.

Corny indeed. You could find so many other topics of such. Try a different topic, but retain your writing style.

One comment...How come no one is replying? I really need reviews to help my story.

Thanks.

...Well since you actually go to my school...A reader does not need to know the politics of Warcraft in order to understand this. I think I pretty much explained everything ...

This story is good, but plot and descriptions could be rephrased. Mechanics are pretty decent.

This is pretty good for your age, echoing Metalhead. Plus the post before me.