Lycanstyle01

The windows rattled like rabid animals in a cage. Brief flashes of lightning lit up the pitch black sky. Gerard turned on his mat, his mind blurred with drowsiness. Only ...

Note: Thanks for crits. I see I needed it =P. Destruction is bliss Thy destruction is greater than thy hate Spite thee and thou shall depart from life Prologue: A ...

2 yrs later... omg i write garbage wtf was i thinking?!?

O.K. I quit youngwriters. Someone please close ALL my posts. Everyone is so negatory. I hope this site gets a virus and closes down. :D :D :D :D

You don't know that, Antong. How do you know that this will turn out cliche? Justify your cause. By the way, which song are you doing for English? And which ...

Upated Chapters: -Chapter #1 Prologue: There once lived some chosen people who had powers that normal people defined as..."unnatural". They had differences, and divided up into two main groups. In ...

When I tried to copy from word to here, these symbols came up. I am very sorry and will fix them.

O.k. I was lying. I thought you said you wanted me to be nice to your post. Do you want me to critic your story?

I don't find any mistakes. He has revised his story so much, it is close to the "perfect" status. If so, why don't you post his "mistakes"?

What is this? Did you edit this? If so, please, change this so that people like me would not have to waste our time clicking on this.

This was an extremely good story. The best part of it was the descriptions of Sarah's "good luck". You were creative with some of them.

I think it should be easy to find mistakes AND the resemblance. Not that it matters, but I find some things dull

This story definitely need more description. In my mind while reading this, I see everything as almost black and white. Also, there are a couple of grammar mistakes. Make sure ...

At some point in the story, I become a bit agitated and bored. Maybe change the plot a little bit? Other than that, I find funny little twists of information ...

You confused me, the reader, a bit in chapters 2-3. I advise rephrasing that. Other than that, I think the plot is very good. Keep up the good plot!