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Sorry I'm late! JemJive said I could join :) Name: Astri Jade Cooper [known as Astri] Gender: Female Age (15-18): 16, but looks younger, about 14 Personality: Quite naive, acts ...

I thought seeing as we were pming so much I'd review some of your work :) I really like this poem! Fresh use of haikus that I haven't seen in ...

Thanks for the comments everyone :) You really helped! I have a creative writing assignment at the minute and I was really struggling, but my friend just looked over it ...

@darkangel_05 my favourite pokemon are Eevee and Jigglypuff. I can't choose between the two hehe! I like Vulpix too :) I don't have anymore Pokemon stories, but I do have ...

I think BookGeek pointed out all the points I was going to. The only thing I would suggest is either to end with the beginning line "Do you believe in ...

Welcome :D Good luck with the writing dreams. Sounds like you've got a great career ahead of you! See ya round!

I hope this is the right place to post, looked at all the forums and felt like this was the most appropriate. I'm 21 years old and just about to ...

Thanks so much for all the feedback! You may be surprised to hear that I am GLAD to hear bad feedback! Basically, as I said I wrote this many years ...

This is a story I wrote about eight years ago and recently found again. I've re-edited it and thought I would share. Feedback is always appreciated :) Underneath the Beech ...

Thanks for the comments everyone! I may add more to the dialogue, the reason I didn't was because I was takind the dialogue exactly from the movie, but I take ...

No problem! Feel free to use the ideas I suggested or not to use them, it's your choice :) But you should definitely keep writing and NEVER delete things, because ...

I've posted this in fanfiction because it is based on the beginning of the movie Sweet Home Alabama and concentrates on what could have happened with Melanie (Dakota Fanning) and ...

Hi! I'm Emma and I'll be reviewing today :) I'll analyse it bit-by-bit and then give my overall thoughts at the end Iknow there are mistakes i just want to ...

I know this really isn't what this forum is for but I am really wondering. Has anyone ever heard of the TV show Veronica Mars? What happened is it was ...

Just re-edited :) May submit another chapter if people like it!