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Could you please review my story, Gingerbread - Specifically, I was wondering if you could focus on characters, the ending and the suggestion that I have quoted in the piece ...

Astri Okay, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE? First, the mysterious snake, now gunshots coming from nowhere? It all seemed to be coming from one girl, so I peeked ...

Hi, I'm Emma and I'll be your reviewer :) My eyes fly open, and I look around, my husband's back presses against mine, as I prop up on my elbow, ...

Sure, if you have time I'd like a review :)

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I've edited a few things and reposted, but there are still some edits I am working on. @shubhilovestowrite You know, it's funny, the reason I ...

Astri "I'm sixteen. I know, I look a lot younger. How old are you?" I asked Stella. I couldn't believe she'd talked to me! It's like, I think it, and ...

Thanks so much for reviewing mine! :D

Astri I watched as teenagers began to devour the food on the table. I waited a few minutes and when nobody started choking or falling asleep, I went to get ...

Wow, I love this! It reminds me of old legends from Cornwall, England, about how mermaids would sing to sailors and they would swim out to see them and they ...

Hi there! Would you review my story please? I'm looking for really in-depth reviews as it's an important uni project. I've had some good feedback so far, but would love ...

Oh awesome! Thanks :D

Astri People had tried to make conversation with me in the van. I hadn't spoken, I couldn't speak. If I opened my mouth I would have cried my heart out. ...

Sorry... umm.. what's a DT thread? :?

This is my final creative writing project in my third year of university; it is also the first creative writing project I've done whilst at uni, so I would love ...

Astri I was sitting in the garden playing an imaginary game with my dolls when I saw a van pull up to the front of my house. Three men got ...