Luvzi12

Hi! I'm new too :) You can see my newbie post a few posts above yours called 'Emma Smilerz'. I hope you like it here as much as I hope ...

Oh yeah I used to love Pippi Longstocking! Thanks for your input, I think the YWS might really help me develop as a writer!

Can you enter notes into an iPod without typing them on a computer first? *curious* I didn't think that was possible. On an Ipod touch you can, if you update ...

Hiya, I've been writing since I was 3 (no lie, I have computerised proof =P) and now I am 19; at university studying English literature and theatre studies feeling like ...

I really want to read it, but I'm terrified of bees! Like, I have a phobia, I liked watching Pushing Daisies until it had bees in and I had to ...

After I ordered the extra pizza, the first pizza arrived, and we started getting calls explaining the no-shows excuses. Becca had a date with Derron (who forgot and showed up ...

Fall asleep; Waste away; Make childhood fears; Drop dead today. I don’t want to smile; I don’t want to cry; Want to stay in my room; Away from the hype. ...

I really liked this, particuarly the rythm. I'm sorry I have no criticism! I really enjoyed it!

I sit on the little cliff on the edge of the forest Maybe you were attempting a poetic voice, but I think 'I am sitting' or 'I sat' would be ...

His black hair was greased back on top of his head. No need for 'on top of his head', where else would his hair be? He was a dork, but ...

All I want for Christmas… (A short story) 'What do you want for Christmas Loretta?' My best friend Sam asked me as we walked on the snow-covered gravel into town. ...

I really don't have anything to add, the critical appraisal before me said everything I wanted to say, and it was a very good criticism too! (Sorry, I'm crticising the ...

I thought it was really good, but was surprised of it being their first kiss at eighteen! In 2007! Maybe things are different in Colorado, but in the UK there's ...

Hi, sorry I'm new to this so probably can't critique you well, but just to say that I really liked the style because it's very personal and creates a strong ...