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Honestly, JemJive, I much preferred the original as I remember it. Mainly it's the last word "fake", it just seems so unrelated to the rest of it. I think the ...

Thanks for everyone's comments! I have now had a re-edited version of this PUBLISHED!! :D

Thank you so much to both of you :)

I'm not that keen on the title and I think the poem is a bit contradictory in places, but I thought I'd post it anyway. Stop telling me I'm perfect ...

@Griffinkeeper I took your advice and removed the swaring at last. Thanks for the advice!

Thanks so much everyone. I added a note about the strange structure.

I guess if you're terrible at keeping secrets, it's best to just go ahead and say so, eh? Haha. I liked this, as I liked its sequel. It's a little ...

You have some capitalization issues and line breaks in weird places, but maybe you intended it that way? I did indeed intend it that way :) Thank you for your ...

This is the second part to a poem. Read the first here, if you like (although the pieces can stand alone): I Can't Keep Secrets If you think I’ll take ...

Note: I cannot change the form. It looks odd, I know, but it has to stay this way for reasons I'm not going to post. If you would like to ...

Hey everyone, I don't think it'll make that much of a difference as it seems like you lot have progressed the story yourself lol, but I'm going to drop out ...

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I think I wrote this piece far too quickly, I should inject a lot more emotion into this piece! Really wish I'd posted this sooner ...

Hey :) If you have a chance before tomorrow, please review my work: Sadly it's not finished :( But hopefully after someone has looked over it I'll be inspired to ...

This is a story I wrote for a creative writing project. It's an adaptation of the fairytale Little Red Riding Hood. Any feedback is appreciated, even though I've already handed ...

So your teacher wanted you to write Hamlet in short form? XD Here are my suggestions: in a land called Arb It's not necessary to say where he lives, you ...