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Thank you so much, you're a very kind reviewer! I would definitely recommend the movie- I loved it! (Hence why the first fan fiction I've ever written is about that ...

Hey thanks for the review! "Ignore me if this seems silly but considering as I haven't read the first chapter that will be true of some of my future comments ...

Chapter Two: Runaways The bus station was practically empty when Emily arrived. A mother and son sat together, the boy wheeling a toy truck up and down the arm rests; ...

Chapter One: House Of Nightmares Lying in bed Emily mentally prepared herself for the nightmares to begin. She waited for the pressure to mount her, the whispers in her ear, ...

Hi! I'm here to review :) A hazy green mist hung lightly over the blue-gray city buildings, while a still breeze rippled through the mild night air. The first sentence ...

You can read a very early first draft here: It has changed a lot since then though, including the title, so please don't judge me too harshly by what you ...

Thank you!

It's going to be made by UCLan Publishing Details of my book aren't on there yet, but I'm sure they will be in a few weeks.

So I just got confirmation that I am being published!! I don't know yet whether it will be a hard copy of a book or just an e-book, but I ...

Cute poem, but isn't it "flurple", not "fluple"? Also, I think Turtle rhymes with Purple ;)

Thank you so much :)

@ytejas Ah yes, the elongated sentence problem that I always have! When I wrote this last night (despite the fact I edited it) I still had James Earl Jones reading ...

The beginning of this reminded me of Philip Larkin's poem, "This Be The Verse", which begins "They fuck you up, your mum and dad." Now onto the critique: "They got ...

@Ultraviolet you shouldn't feel silly for writing a critique longer than the original piece, there's an art to writing succinctly, which is why writing picture books for children is so ...

This is the beginning of a story. Synopsis: At midnight, five teenagers inexplicably decide to follow a raven... Rosalie could not sleep. She tossed and turned; images of an unfamiliar ...