Lurlene_Mcdaniel_Rox

thnks but no thanks srry i am just over that story

Wow that was really good and I love how you add harry potter into it you must be a fan there is one spelling mistake though He looked remarkably like ...

Wow that was really good You were so descriptive it was amazing did you win the contest wow i am still shocked at how amazing that was it was really ...

I tought it was really good but it was a little jumpy. there were a few mistakes like -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She taught how

Wow that was really good I loved how you put so much description in and I odn't think you should dumb it down at all it was really good i ...

OMG that is horrible i can't believe that and yes they weren't nuns just sisters see Sisters Toni Melville, 43, and Denise Reynolds, 42, have been charged with the manslaughter ...

The Key to My Diamond Heart As I sat there holding my dying fiancée’s hand, I thought about all the memories that we had had together. There were so many ...

HEyy I thought it was pretty good there was a few spelling mistakes but it was overly good and srry but i need points to post m y story I ...

Heyy I think that it is more like a summary too, I found it quite boring the beginnign didn't catch me like the begginning was just kinda boring I want ...

Heyy There is parts where it could be better like when you said he was beautiful most guys are hot not beutufily or handsom and it could be improved a ...

Midnight Romance 3 I ran right through the house and out the front door as fast as I could not stopping for anyone or anything. I ran home with tears ...

Heyy Wow that is pretty good you have been on her for like sooo long u were like the second person to post a story wehn did you discover this ...

Heyy Wow that was really good adn like it made me really think adn all it is really really good wow u should like enter it into a contest haha

Hey that is good

:wink: Please edit and let me know, it helps alot for I have just started writing within the last year. Thanks Midnight Romance 2 The following night after I talked ...