Lunasol21

Thank you, and I plan on expanding on them. Sometimes though, I like to leave them be. Lately, I've been writing really short poems for some reason. And of course, ...

Weakness My hand is weak, My eyes are numb, To write no more Or to toil on? My brain is empty, My heart is slow, Write pen. Write. Swimming Can ...

I TOTALLY understand! Like you don't belong in this world, and the world inside your head doesn't seem to exist right? Like questioning your own existence? Well, if so I ...

Oh how I hate the stars, such small pitiful things, They ruin all the comfort, that the darkness brings. The last poem is very dark, but that makes it better. ...

Writer's Block = worst thing ever. I actually like the fact that you repeated wishing and waiting throughout the poem. It created a steady rhythm that made the poem seem ...

My name is Grace, I found this website when looking for a site to find "people like me" and read some poetry haha. I live in a small town where ...

I think punctuation would help create a better rhythm in the poem, but the language and repetition added a great effect.

[quote="SweetMoments"]Smeared with stains of regret quote] This line makes me picture a young child with blood smeared on their face; I really like it. For not being a poet, this ...

Thanks! I'm pretty new here...just joined last night.

Ever wish you could start again, Flick a switch, Forget the pain, Sail across this sea of life, Free of waves, Rid of strife, I'm not one who usually likes ...

Bear with me guys, I'm new to this. I'm not even sure if I am posting it in the right area! Haha It's rather short, but fitting for my first ...

The language you use almost makes the poem palpable. I especially love the first stanza; the poem approaches love in a creative way. Your use of imagery was superb! Great ...