Lunasol21

My heart hides in Hogwarts, My soul resides in Narnia, My eyes look to Wonderland, My ears listen for Atlantis. Stuck in the Room of Requirement, I've fallen down the ...

Only white permeates these borders, these lines around your body; a wedged black marker divides your contours from the rest of the blank-static world. Like the knife of a suicide, ...

I've lost my pen -- my veins are clogged with black poison. somehow, the ink still flows from my fingertips, and I'm not able to stopper it. perhaps the ink ...

I simply adore this poem. I'm not usually a fan of rhyming, but I think it attributed to the dream-like and light-hearted tone. It's a relief to read less serious ...

I know the corners of his mouth, they bleed, they blaze, they search you out - you are the smoke he talks about, the dancing smoke amongst the tears staining ...

I absolutely adore this poem. The hidden meaning within such a simple topic is astounding. I disagree with previous reviews, this is not shallow at all. You've really captured something ...

I absolutely adore this poem. The hidden meaning within such a simple topic is astounding. I disagree with previous reviews, this is not shallow at all. You've really captured something ...

Thank you for inspiring me to write again.

This was truly a beautiful and unique poem. Every suggestion I have has already been covered by others, but I will say I think the flow of the poem is ...

Many would call it cliche, but I love it. The imagery was great, and it speaks to all the people who have felt the same. Great read!

Alone, truely alone. Tragically awaiting the nonexistant end Oh, immortal vexation Just stop, oh, stop it! Stop wasting me away as I descend Lower into the abyss, Desperately grasping at ...

The simplicity of this poem is truly beautiful. I find that I prefer to read shorter poems, because they say so much with so little words. It really speaks of ...

I really love this. It's beautiful and the echoing adds a great effect. No criticisms here! Bravo!

In all honesty, I have no particular criticisms of this piece. It was absolutely wonderful and speaks so much truth about what goes on when we try to write something, ...

We run through the veins of time Our life a string cut by fate and tied by destiny. Has been is will be there is no beginning and no end ...