Lulu99

Awwwww, this is so sweet. I love it. Awesome job. Really.

Whoo! New girl, welcome to YWS. You're gonna like it at this writing community. There's so much for you. If people seem harsh when they review, it is only because ...

I really like your descriptions. The story is very grabbing. Awesome job.

I liked it. But some more details/imagery can go a long way. But I did enjoy reading it. :)

Oh my gosh, that's so sad. Brilliant job. Really, excellent. I was tearing up. I love it when people absolutely love their pets.

I love this. This is the first part I have read and I no idea of what's going on but I want to read on. Great job!

I like the action. It's written very well. The only thing I have to say is scenery or imagery. All i knew was that they were in a forest. Was ...

I like it. The way you showed the contrast between plain black and white and color is very good. I especially like how you drew the second girl, her hair ...

It's not so bad. If anthing its really creative. Don't take this offensively, but "my little pony" 's song was playing in my head as I read definately put a ...

Thank you guys. Yeah, I know about the imagery. I just wanted to know how people would like the very basic outline. It's my first posting ever. I would try ...

His angelic face was agonized with fear as he tossed and turned in his sheets. Sweat formed on his brow, he groaned as his dreams were were plagued by wicked ...