LukanRinta

I see your face, my blood is on fire. Churning. You see me and smile, my heart flutters. Flip-flops. You walk towards me, my mind goes blank. Thoughtless. My searing ...

The punctuation is probably horrible, and this is really old... Infatuation. A perfect fit. Melded together. My heart one with his. Desolation. This is my world. Torn apart. Two separate ...

Holy muffin cakes! Haha, sorry for my strange enthusiasm, but this was beautiful in every way possible. It didn't have much rhythm, but it was enough to make it a ...

As the sun melts below the horizon, and we say our last "goodnight", I can't bear to turn my back until you're out of sight. Do you remember the past ...

My blood is cold. The room is black. The tears run down my face like razor blades. The smoke of despair clouds my head. I'm surrounded by horror. Every direction ...

The boys on the field, The crowds all here; Hot dogs and nachos. They win ; we cheer. Semi-colon and comma use can be confusing, be careful. My cap against ...

Like darkness flees from the light, one glance at you and I take flight. Something about you isn't the same, and I'm too weak to play that game. My heart's ...

First Year Jet walked uncertainly into the class. Every head turned to look at him except one girl in the back of the room. "You must be Jet Rood," the ...

Jet threw the front door open and ran down the sidewalk. He heard his mother shut the door loudly behind him. He was always leaving it open, and it annoyed ...

This made me smile. And not many poets have managed to do that! I really enjoyed this little bit. It was definitely different (which is good!!) and it was entertaining. ...

Did you mean to make me cry? Had you wanted to say goodbye? How could we know if we didn't try? We could have made each other fly. I didn't ...

Let's shed a heart, Let's break a tear. Let's wonder if someone will hear. A broken heart, A fallen tear. Hold me close, chase away my fear. A trusted Promise, ...

The pressure builds. The anger grows. Impatience flares. I want to be alone! Sit and think, puzzle and ponder. Something is wrong! But what? I wonder... The pressure builds. The ...

Hey! Lukan here! I'm going to be reviewing your poem today! :P Before I say anything more, I'd like you to know that the idea for this poem is really ...

I want to be a bouncing ball, always changing; taking it in stride. I want to be a paper airplane, going where the wind wills. I want to be a ...