LukanRinta

Whisper to me, darling. Tell me your lies. Say you love me; look into my eyes. Surrealistic anguish keeps me alive. That light in the blackness helps me survive. I ...

You're only my drug, but I'm heavily addicted. This insanity; this love is not what I predicted. Like a hopeless drunkard yearning for wine. I'm dying of thirst, and you ...

Pouring rain. Searing pain. A rushing river. A racking shiver. Storm warning. Still mourning. The rising flood. The dripping blood. Thunder groans. Another moan. The wind is screaming; My awareness ...

This is the first time I've posted anything like this... And the first time I've ever really written anything like this. It's for English class, but I decided to try ...

I really liked this. Especially the ending. It went out strong, with a roar, and really had a lasting echo that rang out to me. My advice though, would be ...

So I'm not really sure I like this. It doesn't flow so great and it's kind of hard to follow. It kinda follows exactly what I was thinking at the ...

For me, this piece really clicked. I find myself going through this exact same thing right now, so I could really connect to the poem. Your use of small, simple ...

No one believes the old wives tale That says your wish will come true, When the numbers on your clock Add up to six minus two. But when my friends ...

WOW! This was absolutely amazing from start to finish! The first stanza caught my attention with the interesting yet perfect rhymes and the originality of the thought. Throughout you kept ...

This poem is about 4 years old, and I realize it's not that good. I tried to get the easiest nitpicks out while typing it up :) Enjoy! I look ...

Another age; Another time. Another song; Another rhyme. Another man, Another dove. Another chance, Another love. A love so tender, A love so sweet. A love so potent, A love ...

I like this better than the original song... Actually I love it. Usually I find spin-offs to be agonizingly simple or just way too different to truly be a spin-off, ...

So I was right all along. I can't believe that it's all wrong. Like a sad and unfinished song. So I was right all along. Do you really truly care? ...

The flow is weird, but once you get used to it it's not so bad. I know it's a bit off, but I wrote it in only about ten minutes.. ...

I know that his makes absolutely no sense. It's sort of supposed to just be saying ways to set dark scenes, and different opportunities that could help with that. Yeah ...