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  • The girl automatically stormed out not saying a word, not even thinking of anything. I was alone in the gym, so I decided to grab my bag and head outside. ...

    Dec 14, 2007


  • I paused in the middle of our argument. I heard the click of a doorknob and I caught a whiff of a new, sweet scent. Fellow vampire. I smiled to ...

    Dec 14, 2007

  • Other Poetry
    Re: I'm Sorry

    That was really good. I liked the message that it sent. good luck and hope to hear more of you!! --Lucky

    Dec 14, 2007


  • Asuna: I walked out of the locker room and onto the basketball court. There I found Codie, dribbling the ball up and down the court. Shooting a few baskets here ...

    Dec 14, 2007


  • Interesting... I'm in!! Name: Asuna Age: 15 Gender: Female Species: Vampire/ witch height: 5'8" Skin Tone: Very pale Hair: Orange, knee length, always in high pig-tails with bells at the ...

    Dec 14, 2007


  • Grace: Vampire I walked in the hallway with my pass to the library clutched in my right fist. I took a sharp right turn down the next hall. I froze. ...

    Dec 14, 2007


  • Name: Grace Race: Vampire Age: looks 17 Orientation: Men Eyes: Topaz Hair: waist length, black Height: 5'6" Body type: thin, looks fragile(no one knows but she's really strong and fast) ...

    Dec 14, 2007

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories
    Re: On the Run

    keep it up, that was really good. Can't wait to find out what will happen. by the way, what's with the whole moldy cakish thing?? No one in their right ...

    Dec 13, 2007

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Let's Grow Up

    The first stanza was really good. my friend and i made something similar to that before... Anyways I agree with everyone else. it is a little bit choppy and the ...

    Dec 13, 2007

  • Historical Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Shipwreck

    Okay that was really good. What was up with the whole did not't thing, it's didn't . Any way the whole thing was really interesting. towards the end, when she ...

    Dec 13, 2007


  • Umm I'm not the biggest Zac Efron fan(probably spelled wrong) Any way it alright. I give it a 6/10 :) --Lucky

    Dec 13, 2007


  • Hey M.B. that was really good!(even if it was possibly written about me) Sorry i missed the time, i forgot I had a school concert to go to. Oops! See ...

    Dec 12, 2007

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Garden of Life

    Life is like a garden. You pick what you choose and you can't replant it once it's gone. Friends are like the flowers, they bloom and they wilt. Some will ...

    Dec 11, 2007

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: A l o n e

    That was really good. I can relate to having a friend move away, watching the friendship crumble over a long distance. Really good. Liked the message (again probably because I ...

    Dec 11, 2007

  • Scripts
    Re: Dear Vivian

    That was really good. So far I'm kinda interested yet sort of bored, nothing has happened yet. Anyway PM me I'm on. See ya soon! --Lucky

    Dec 11, 2007


Think of all the beauty still left around you, and smile.
— Anne Frank