Lucky_Duck

The sun rose slowly and the light woke Maura from the little rest that she gets. She tossed and turned in her bed, not wanting to get up. Soon enough, ...

Hey MB!!! It is too bad that you were in such a hurry that you couldn't fix any mistakes, I bet you were also tired. Anyway, that was pretty good, ...

That was really great. very insightful,and all that. :D Great description and depth. Hope to see more of your writing! -- Lucky_Duck 8)

You have never felt the cool breeze as your moonlit walk slowly ends? You have never splashed in salt water with all of your summer friends? You have never met ...

Hey,I'm not going to make this too long because I don't have that much time. That was really good,you know, the main idea and stuff.The characters are great too but ...

Ok, I was going to say what everyone else said about the forced rhyming, yadda, yadda, yadda. I really liked the imagery that you described. Over all, it was a ...

Hey, that was really interesting, it describes so much in such little context. I still don't know what racecar has to do with it, oh well, i'm sure you had ...

M.B Author, theronguard, and DarkBeast, Please read this. ********************************************** Her favorite color was pink, she loved flowers and smiles, and cute little winks. She loved and

Our lives are like old black and white movies. Romance seems so real until you find out it's fake. You think something will happen until it takes an unexpected turn. ...

You loved me when my brain thought I hated you Although, my heart, often ignored, loved you But then you decided you hated me back You left me with a ...

No one knows the real me The fake one is what you see I never was what you think I am, and even with this mask, I never will be.

Anger overcomes me. So fierce, the evil and darkness nearly blinds me. I want to thrash and bash and break who ever made me feel this way. Something whispers in ...

Once in a world of only wishes Came hope walking, smiling holding In the tender tears of the loved lost Littles, and the pain of days Became lost in the ...

Thanks you guys for all the advice, I am sure that it will help me in the future writings that i have planned. Oh, and OregonGirl, I am really glad ...

You think you are friends, until she turns around and stabs you in the back. Laughing at you, and making jokes, just to get some attention. She tells everyone your ...