Lucky_Duck

sorry, I was a little tired when I read it, but it makes sense now. Hope to hear more from you --Lucky

You're new here right? Apparently no one has told you that you shouldn't write LONG posts. Some people get bored and stop in the middle. I actually managed to finish ...

That was really good. I'm really starting to like Asriel (sorry if its mispelled) Same thing about the whole mind reading part, I think you should work on that a ...

Hey Chris! Welcome to YWS. I'm sure I'll like at least some of your stories. Hope to hear from you soon and Good luck to you! --Lucky :D

That was really good... I love soup! :D -- Lucky

8/10 Love the action (not a wolf girl though) --Lucky

Wow that was really good. Everyone thinks that you read Maximum Ride but I'm guessing Twilight!!! I love twilight but i don't really side with the werewolves I'm more of ...

Hey JC nice to see you back again. Interesting news you've had there... Well, Good Luck to you and Bella. By the way, I love that name! :D -- Lucky

That was realy looks like everyone already pointed out the mistakes that you made so all I really have to tell you is keep up the good work. PM me ...

I stole a glance of his face and fell in love right there A sudden rush that made me flush I couldn't help but stare A class we had was ...

That was really good. It makes me think of a book I was recently reading titled 'New Moon'. If you're into vampire action/ romantic books I suggest that series ('New ...

I sat at my desk, studying. My name, Grace Winters, written in different kinds of calligraphy, all over my paper. It was as boring as watching paint dry, but Mother ...

I haven't been on for a while so tell me if it is bad :wink: ---------------------------- See me real Or see me true See me old Or see me new ...

That was really good for a person who is just starting Haiku... I think that my friend wrote something worse than that, which is saying a lot becuase in haikus ...

Thank you for the advice, kitty. :) I changed the story up a bit, for the better, I hope. :? Oh well, I am sure you advice prevailed. Thank You!!!!!!!!! ...