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Re: My Final Story
My Final Story Everyone was always telling me I need to take it easy; that I need to chill out. How I wish I had listened to them now. When ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: His Mistake
I like that the whole time in the poem you are pretty much blaming him and saying that he hasn't been that great, but then at the end, by allowing ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: The most beautiful eyes
I like the poem. One part that... i guess i got stuck on was that you use the word illusion twice. I don't know, it could just be me but ...
Apr 17, 2007