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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Who wants to study fish?" ~ Ryle "I find starfish fascinating, myself. I'm thinking of making it my symbol." ~ Gale Soup or salad?
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Alex? Oh, I like that name. Alex Beading, I think. Has a ring a bit, don't you think maybe?" ~ Grace *raises eyebrow* "And here I thought you turned your ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Ah the concept of self. What is the 'Self', right? Take it away, Ryle." ~ Marylyn *shrugs* "As I stand, I'm happy with how I am. If others think to ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Poem
Psh. Leave it to Pork to ruin the fun. Party-pooper. Good ending though, I must admit.
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Who says I want my story to be written? I pity the bloke who thinks to put it to pen. What, does he intend to interrogate every dead soul who ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Bird drawings
Hullo there! I think I just finished critiquing your story, 42. Nice work on that, by the way. These are amazing. You did these using colored pencils? Nice work. The ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
what's navel gazing??? Snoink does a fabulous job of explaining this in her critique videos, if you care to dig them up and watch them. Navel gazing is more or ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: When life gives you lemons... (a philosophy challenge)
XD Made me laugh. Love the second one the best. come on!!! i know you know some this is open for everyone to post some wit/wisdom thay don't have to ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
*flicks strand of hair away from her face and watches it swing* "I'm barred from the realms, what can I say? Cozy trip to Death's world and a happy reincarnation ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: When life gives you lemons... (a philosophy challenge)
XD Made me laugh. Love the second one the best.
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Poem
Golden light whispered through crisp leaves and quietly baptised the ground beneath them Wind whispers, and they dance in morning dew Celebrating a life long past. The children congregate and ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
I'd jump in and question them about it. Depending on their answer, we'll either right the matter, or drift apart. Needless to say, the latter would be pretty rough, so ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: name association
High school school boy, maybe pressing for some freedom, maybe held back by authority figures. Reminds me of one of the boys from The Dead Poets Society, where their futures ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Explain this picture
*claps* I'll go with Velvet's story.
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
I love the first two lines. Draws you in. The actual first paragraph was brilliant, but the continuing repetition of the "I am ___" in the second paragraph throws it ...
Mar 1, 2009
